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Dan, www.artofdan.com
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First, I must compliment the photographer on the use of angles and choice of lighting conditions in this composition. Setting the composition at a slight angle creates interesting diagonals in the composition; between the angles of the model and window braces in particular. The position of the model slightly off from center also draws the eye around the entire composition rather than to a specific point or straight off the photograph. The choice of natural lighting from a single source helps draw the focus of the composition to the model. Having a tinted or partially covered window also prevents excess glair or high contrast between lighting and shadow; the lighting used gives a nice, subtle feel to the composition. The model is also seated in an interesting pose, making the composition more balanced in this shallow depth of field.

Some things to consider would be the area around the model; do the additional textures and surfaces add to or clutter the image. Second, try experimenting with various cameras, lenses, settings, and depth of field; the model's mid-section and face are in perfect focus, though her feet (the title focus) are slightly out of focus. The setting of the room can also make the space seem more open/vacant or cozy/crowded (it all depends on the photographer's intent). Finally, try experimenting with lighting in the various spaces of choice; lamps with various bulbs, heights, and direct or indirect lamp shades (if any). Mirrors can also add subtle light from the windows. The windows themselves, from the direction of light (time of day) to how much light is entering the room can both add to or take away from the composition.

In all, great choices in the composition. The facial expression and position of the model leaning against the window (as well as the choice of how her hair drapes down across her shoulder and toward the front, keeping her face clear) make the composition very interesting. Taking into consideration all the elements that make this composition work so well, the craft is well done. Congratulations.
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cullenhutsell Featured By Owner 3 days ago  New member Hobbyist Artist
Now that is art
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saakshi007 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2015
daring :heart: :kiss:
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:iconyarilitmanen:
Yarilitmanen Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful arches, would love to see more of them.
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:icone-digitalfantasy:
E-DigitalFantasy Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2014
Breathtaking beauty!!! A Dream!!!
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:iconkostaschicken:
kostaschicken Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2014
Baby this is promising!
Do you keep your promises?
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:iconfmfoto:
FMfoto Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
beautiful
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tattoolover66 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013
you are so very beautiful
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:iconmorbiusx33:
morbiusx33 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013
Nice work.
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FelipeMaker-BR Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
an unusual pose, but beauty! You are very beautiful with or withou clothes. love your eye expression :love:
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suicidekid1962 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013
That is what I call a heart stoping look, when a woman is so beautiful that when you look at her your heart skips a beat. Absolutly wonderfull to look at
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aRqGaMo Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013
Nice composition....
skin colour is great.
Beautiful shot!
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:iconjgreen11:
jgreen11 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013
Sexy! I would like to see this one with different lighting...maybe bright light coming from the window into the dark room.
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:icondarbernardi:
darbernardi Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
fantastic
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:iconblackradar:
blackradar Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013
wow!
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:iconaj1976:
AJ1976 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013
Beautiful!
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:icontwizzid:
Twizzid Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013
Very Sexy & Beautiful!!!
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:iconcrescentsi:
crescentsi Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Very erotic! Your feet certainly are beautiful! :-)
x
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BigHeadTodd Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Nice photo, very pretty model!
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:iconcrescentsi:
crescentsi Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Very beautiful woman :-)
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mitchbadedesign Featured By Owner May 7, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I absolutely LOVE the fact that, what will be most men's bullseye in this picture, is partially covered. again, the intrigue this builds is great, but the pic is phenomenal. nice work!
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MichaelCPhotography Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013   Photographer
Beautiful!
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:iconkeitaro91:
Keitaro91 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013
you truly have the most beautiful, perfect feet i've ever seen.
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:iconscopolamin:
scopolamin Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
very tasteful! great photo! dan + saju = awesome!
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:iconilktas:
ILKTAS Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013
All photo's without a smile.
Pls smile a bit..
Make the photo warmer.
Good work.
Thank you.
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michaelroycowart Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013
bla bla bla...she's beautiful...period
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:iconmjcs16:
MJCS16 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Student Photographer
Stunning work.
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theRopes Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Professional Photographer
Your awaress of your body, and especialy how you articuate your feet are reason you have become one of my all-time favorite models here in dA-land :heart:
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EirikHenden6 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Beautiful !
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parmangolikht Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Professional Photographer
ohhhh my sexy
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:iconmichaelcphotography:
MichaelCPhotography Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013   Photographer
Saju, your beautiful face and body are always such a joy to behold! This is a lovely shot!
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:iconvertiearth:
VertiEarth Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful!
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:iconsandor09:
sandor09 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013
Very beautiful feets.
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:iconburgos12:
burgos12 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013
YOUR FEET ARE AS BEAUTIFUL AS THE REST OF YOU!
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:iconoo-monkey-oo:
oO-Monkey-Oo Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist
You are far too gorgeous! Great photo
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:iconwkhai:
wkhai Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
lovely shot!
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:iconrudoms:
rudoms Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
Oooo!
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overmind81 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Can I take your legs to open up a little?
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AdrianFarenheitTepes Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012
Cute! :hug:
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:iconalphazion:
alphazion Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
Very nice :)
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Kotrebo Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You have the deepest arches...
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:iconchutonon:
chutonon Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
love those feet
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:icone-x3:
e-x3 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
;)
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:iconjohnsonlucas:
johnsonlucas Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012
Just gorgeous model
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:iconbasstraxx:
basstraxx Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012
so beautiful
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:icongaiuscassius:
gaiuscassius Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012
There's something very delicate in you ^^
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:iconramzakirk:
ramzakirk Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012
una toma con un toque sexy,y provocativa,sus pies son hermosos.
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:iconmypreciuuss:
mypreciuuss Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
WOW!!!!!!! UH-MAZING!
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digitalHD Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Professional Photographer
You certainly make my heart flutter!
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:iconemerson-fialho:
Emerson-Fialho Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Professional Artist
Spetacular... Very beautiful!
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mikebp Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Professional Photographer
Beautiful and wonderfully erotic image!! M
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