Shop Mobile More Submit  Join Login


Submitted on
January 8, 2013
Image Size
18.5 MB
Mature Content


659 (who?)
Mature Content Filter is On
(Contains: nudity)
Photographer : Jacques Rattaz - [link]
Model: me -
Add a Comment:
There are things I like about this photo a lot and things I don't care for all that much--sometimes they're the same things. For example, I find the use of plastic, lit in this way to be visually fascinating. It definitely draws ones attention. And the way it's ripped makes it look almost like fire or ice. ON the other hand, the stretch marks in the top right portion distracts a little from the over all affect.

I'm also not sure I like the way the model is light. Visually, I think it would be more appealing if the red lighting went the whole length of the model's body, instead of being just the few small patch. Having one side backlight in red and the other backlight in blue could have been quite dramatic. But the limited effect isn't consistent enough to achieve that, and is almost more distracting.

Obviously, the problem with achieving that effect is that the blue covers all the sheets at the bottom and the red at the top, making it virtually impossible to achieve the look I suggested. But perhaps the colors could have been separated by sides instead of top to bottom.

Finally, I'm not sure I like the legs being in such dark shadows; and I wonder if it wouldn't have been better to crop them at the knees or give them a little more front lighting.

It's still an interesting and enjoyable work; and the model is easy enough to look that it would probably be almost impossible to go entirely wrong. But despite being pretty good, I mourn for what it could have been.
What do you think?
The Artist thought this was FAIR
3 out of 4 deviants thought this was fair.

très belle composition des formes et des couleurs mettant en avant la beauté et le charme de la femme tout en la respectant ! Vous avez utilisé des effets simples qui font une petite merveille ! Le sourire aurait été un plus mais je comprends l'expression qui veut que cette femme soit dans cette pose et attitude avec un 'regard disant qu'elle se sent bien et qu'elle est concentrée ! Beau travail continuez dans ce sens ! les formes et la grâce des femmes doivent être sublimées et mises en avant afin de les faire de leur corps un véritable chef d'oeuvre qui doit toujours être respecté en toutes circonstances !
Merci et bon travail !
What do you think?
The Artist thought this was FAIR
2 out of 2 deviants thought this was fair.

The Artist has requested Critique on this Artwork

Please sign up or login to post a critique.

profutur1971 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014  Professional General Artist
Belle image ! Bon travail ! Félicitations !
rustyyy Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Who did the amazing lighting? Was that also the Photographer??
LithiumDreamsArt Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013
What a fabulous image. great lighting and pose
DeepEye85 Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Professional Photographer
elvis1972 Featured By Owner May 21, 2013
absolute perfection, completely flawless
thecrazyeagle Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Student Interface Designer
Gorgeous Background. Love the use of Curtains & lighting, especially the blue lighting
pendragon93 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013  Professional Photographer
Love the colors!
alomhordozo57 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013
Amazing gallery!
TheNaughtyGonk Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013
Fantastic! Looking stunning as usual!
DarkHeatArt Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013   General Artist
Oustanding shot, Gorgeous model :clap:
Add a Comment: