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collage by Saju90 collage by Saju90
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renaissancemann Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Professional Photographer
I love the transition between the left pose and glasses to the middle, it shows contrast, almost like it was two different ppl. The pose on the right doesn't show that same level of change. I'm not sure what I would suggest, but maybe something along the lines of trying to portray different sides the personality. Right now I see "Intellectual" "Sensual" "Sensual" try "Intellectual" "Sensual" "Bashful" or something like that.
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bwofficer Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
A critique? OK.

I like that it's in black and white. Skin tones exposed just right. The white t-shirt in the left-hand photo is a little bit over-exposed, making it hard to see the edge between it and the background. Maybe a non-white t-shirt would have worked better, e.g. a light cream or light pink one?

The shadows on the background are too heavy. Maybe if you'd stood a little further forward, away from the backdrop, the shadows would be less intense, still there to give depth but not distracting from the main feature which of course is you!

Not that I'm a portrait photographer, mind you. Those are just my thoughts about how the image could be made even more stunning, based on comparing to other photographs I have seen.

I do love it, though.
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Raceaddict Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
Those glasses.... they just do it for me every time.

Every.

Single.

Time!
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Joe-4-Kerr Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Since Ilike most of your photos, this is one of fews I wanted to add to favs. No idea why.
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snoogaloo Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
very beautiful collage!
the lighting, poses, and setting all come together nicely!
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b13visuals Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Nice series! Cute, funny and elegant!
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harrylr Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
Beautiful collage, three great shots.  Love the choice of images too.
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Ulliart Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
You just look fantastic. Those 3 fotos are gorgeous. The left one with the glasses is my favorite.  A good editing.
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420rd Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
well done 
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Broken-Halcyon Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
You look totally different with glasses. If you hadn't specified a collage, I wouldn't have figured it out as fast. Good job on this one!
I like it though not so much as a black and white photo.
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